Overuse of adverbs
The boy ran really fast to catch the runaway ball.
The boy sprinted to catch the runaway ball.
Adverbs—those words that often end in -ly—modify verbs. They’re okay once in a while, but in excess they’re an indicator of weak verb choices. In our example, the adverb “really fast” modifies the verb “ran.” But does “really fast” paint a more vivid word-picture for the reader? Use a juicier verb like “sprinted” instead.
from Grammarly Blog
http://www.grammarly.com/blog/2015/how-to-avoid-overusing-adverbs/
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